| edition | page | line | text | edition | page | line | text |
| 4 | 217 | 15 | gallery | 5 | 217 | 19 | Gallery |
| 3 | 217 | 22 | something (I do not say much, but certainly something) to be | 4 | 217 | 22 | something to be |
| 4 | 217 | -10 | "Excursion" ... alluded to:- [qn-marks round poetry] | 5 | 217 | -10 | Excursion ... alluded to ?- [no qn-marks] |
| 4 | 217 | -12 | the orb, | 5 | 217 | -8 | the orb |
| 4 | 217 | -5 | fire,- | 5 | 217 | -1 | fire- |
| Autograph | 217 | -8 | the orb | Complete | 217 | -8 | the orb, |
| Complete | 217 | -8 | orb, | Library | 363 | 11 | orb |
| Complete | 217 | -5 | aloft-and wide: | Library | 363 | 14 | aloft, and wide: |
| Complete | 217 | -4 | clouds,/Ere we, who saw, of change were conscious, pierced/ Through their ethereal texture, had become/…fire-…poised,/ | Library | 363 | 15 | clouds,/ Through their ethereal texture pierced- ere we,/who saw, of change were conscious- had become/…fire;…poised,-/ |
| edition | page | line | text | edition | page | line | text |
| 6 | 218 | 8 | this; | 7 | 218 | 10 | this, |
| Complete | 218 | 8 | Repeated, | Library | 363 | 26 | Repeated; |
| 4 | 218 | 19 | [no qn-marks] | 5 | 218 | 12 | [qn-marks] |
| 4 | 218 | 20 | white ... clouds, | 5 | 218 | 24 | white, ... clouds |
| 5 | 218 | 27 | At other | Autograph | 218 | 27 | [indented] At other |
| 4 | 218 | -7 | Temeraire | 5 | 218 | -4 | Téméraire |
| 6 | 218 | -7 | Temeraire: | 7 | 218 | -4 | Temeraire; |