| edition | page | line | text | edition | page | line | text |
| 4 | 401 | 1 | freshness,- above all, ... character: | 5 | 401 | 13 | freshness, above all … character; |
| 4 | 401 | 8 | affected. This is bitterly to be regretted, for few of our artists would paint foliage better, if he would paint it from nature, and with reverence. §Hunt | 5 | 401 | 20 | affected. §Hunt |
| 4 | 401 | 11 | fails, and fails only, in foliage; | 5 | 401 | 21 | fails in foliage, and in foliage only; |
| 4 | 401 | 12 | Daguerreotype ... over fidelity | 5 | 401 | 22 | daguerreotype ... over- fidelity |
| 4 | 401 | 13 | suggested; | 5 | 401 | 23 | suggested: |
| 4 | 401 | 14 | leaf green | 5 | 401 | 24 | leaf-green |
| 4 | 401 | 15 | delicious,- | 5 | 401 | 25 | delicious, |
| 4 | 401 | 16 | but from | 5 | 401 | 26 | but, from |
| 6 | 401 | 1 | The foliage of David Cox | 7 | 401 | 1 | his works destitute … English school.§The foliage of David Cox [paragraph from end of p400 repeated – typo] |
| Autograph | 401 | 18 | suggested; | Complete | 401 | 18 | suggested: |
| 3 | 401 | 22 | walls, | 4 | 401 | 22 | walls |
| 4 | 401 | -18 | Kent, in the British Distribution, this year, there | 5 | 401 | -7 | Kent, exhibited some years ago in the British Distribution, there |
| 4 | 401 | -15 | purple- | 5 | 401 | -4 | purple; |
| 4 | 401 | -3 | honour. I have much pleasure in Creswick's works, and I am glad always to see them admired by others. | 5 | 402 | -1 | honour. [sentence omitted in 5 ] |
| 4 | 401 | -1 | I shall conclude ... [23 lines] ... English art | 5 | 402 | - | [Final § omitted in 5 ] |
| 5 | 401 | 23 | suggested: yet | Autograph | 401 | 18 | suggested; yet |